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Mommy why is your heart black?
You said you loved me with all your heart
You held me when I cried
And sang to me when I was sad
But why mommy why is it now
That your heart is black?
Mommy why am I hurting?
I am crying
I am in pain
I wish for the old mommy
When all I know turns black
Mommy looks mad
Why don't you look at me mommy?
Where is my old mommy?
Mommy why is your heart black?
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So I decided to write a free verse poem about Crona and Medusa. It probably isn't good but who cares it's my first time writing a free verse so I hope you guys like it!!!
Please leave a comment to tell me how I did!!!
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~KisaNeko Apr 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
*gets up. Walks to corner* I'm sorry for being born :iconsulkplz:
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~XxNeon-FleckZXx Apr 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Its ok...
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~KisaNeko Apr 10, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
very nicely done though!
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~XxNeon-FleckZXx Apr 11, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!! :3
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~KisaNeko Apr 11, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
no problem!
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Mood: Love ~Mistle11411 Feb 17, 2013  Student General Artist
Oh my gosh! I LOVE Soul Eater, and this is the first poem I've seen about it! Great job, it fit perfectly with Crona and Medusa!
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~XxNeon-FleckZXx Feb 23, 2013  Student General Artist
Thank you!! It really is an amazing anime and manga!! :3
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Mood: Love ~Mistle11411 Feb 24, 2013  Student General Artist
I KNOW you've just got to love it, it's my fav anime and manga!!!
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poor crona ;__;
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~Insane-Angel13 Aug 1, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
F*** YOU DAMN MADUSAAAA!!!
i love you cronaaa!!!
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